Author needs assistance!
Published October 31st, 2004 in On Azrael's WingsChapter eleven is finished. Yay, team!
Looking over my notes for chapter twelve shows some major additions. The only way to portray the pair of them falling in love is to stretch out the travel between Provey and Azrael’s villa in Wrendon. They have to be firmly entrenched in love by that point.
So let me open this to everybody who’s reading this and is familiar with the original story. Contact me with suggestions of what scenes you’d like to see as they make their way home.
I’m not looking for erotica or anything. I need everyday scenes of life on the road with an army. Give me something you’d like to see, two characters you’d like to see interact, a question you have about one of the characters that I can try to explain.
(A friend of mine, J, will remember helping me with Castle Walls when my editor said it was lacking. I ended up with fourteen new scenes, four chapters of new material. She got a free book out of it . . . and her name in the acknowledgments . . .)
Whaddya say?
